a story by Fabio Barzagli, Paternita.info/Fatherhood (year, 2008)

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Chapter 1 (The feminilized world)


Once upon a time in a distant galaxy was a planet called XereX. Part of the planet was completely green, the other was surrounded by a large grey wall within which could be observed numerous cities inhabited by civilized human beings.


Elsaf, like all the other cities was structured on matriarchy. Inside Elsaf lived Zed, a young boy of 15; as all the male children there, he had been raised by the mother, in fact family and school were managed only by women who had occupied even all the organizational and directive charges of Elsaf.

In previous decades there were two terrible wars that killed a good part of the population, particularly men that were involved in the front line of conflicts; they were decimated and the remaining men were living in a serious state of physical discomfort. Entire family trees were destroyed, having a grandfather was impossible, and it was rare to have a father still intact.

In that context, the women took the upper hand and decided to rebuild the country under new rules where they would have been leading: words like "genetic superiority", "gender regulations", "positive discrimination", "chromosome caste", were on the agenda.

The females were raised and educated to carry out high intellectual roles and become managers, supervisors, teachers; everything was centered around them, the school failures of women during the process of learning were under 0.5%. The men instead were mainly sent directly to the workplace, rarely they studied and in that case they could aspire, at most, to the role of domestic employee, executive secretary or teacher's assistant.

Therefore, the culture of Elsaf wanted males to become workers in the mining, manufacturing, construction, etc, often soldiers in the wars between cities triggered off by female managers vengeful and envious of the possessions of others. The majority of deaths at work and in places of conflict was, obviously, male.

Males were a vital resource: the industry was based on their abilities and it was important for teachers to ensure that males are not made aware of their importance... For that reason women created the educamps.

The educamps were places where small boys were shaped to obedience towards women: every woman, even the smallest, could not be contradicted.

Once a man dared to say "no" to a girl of 3; she wanted a ring that the man was wearing. The man was immediately removed in the nearest Tirac.

Tiracs were called ghost neighborhoods because people marginalized by society lived there; 95% were men and there was also some women who had rebelled against the system. In Tiracs was given the bare minimum to survive. It wasn't possible to leave a Tirac if not through the terrible procedure of "re-education", which was rarely successful. The rate of suicide in Tirac was 70% per annum. The death penalty had been abolished, except for crimes of sexual violence that were being tried for "direttissima" (without going through the normal procedures) by special courts under the principle of presumption of guilt and mercy by women.

In educamps men were convinced of their moral weakness, mental inferiority, and especially their hormone-physical danger, since it was taught that even the little man, if not controlled, packed and chemically treated, became a violent and monstrous executioner.

For the safety of the citizens it had to take fingerprints for baby boys and there were many rules of social control such as the prohibition of leaving an adult male alone in the company of a baby or small child.

Also, for security reasons, it was forbidden to leave the walls because of the dangerous population of savages that, in contact with the wilderness and unspoiled nature, had lost control of the male population and the degeneration of violence had led to cannibalism and slavery.



Parenthood and his exercise had been declared illegal along with sex. Mothers, who essentially procreate through artificial insemination, were in fact legal representatives of sons and daughters up to 35 years of age.

The vote was governed by "chivalry quotas" in systems where the female electorate had free choice among all, on the contrary the male population was obliged to fall on candidates of the other sex.

There were three ministries: the ministry of women's opportunities, the ministry of protection of domestic animals, and the ministry of ideology.

The men were therefore excluded from social participation, without rights to health, awareness, and human development. The discrimination was now part of the culture, was in politics, in courts, in habits, automatisms, thoughts and ideologies. Men were not aware of being discriminated against; how could they recognize to be oppressed if they didn't know freedom?

But social oppression was terrible also on women.
Among them suicides were very high, but unlike the men, that couldn't be said, to not create alarm and not make men doubt about the happiness and the certainty of the superiority of women. Therefore, when it happened, it was said that this woman had moved to another neighborhood or city.

The same for depression, about 90% of women suffered from it, particularly apathy, so that each day they had to attend courses in behavioral psychology during which some personal trainers taught them to always smile, simulate peace and security, and mask problems.

Zed was one of the many boys who worked in the quarries near the west wall.. at that point work and landslides had severely damaged the walls.

One day, a few years later (it was 25 now) there was a fall and a tiny gap opened between the walls. Zed went through the hole to check the damage and found himself outside.



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